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Well seeing as I just have 19 more weeks of school It is about that time to send out some letters of interest. If y'all would take a minute and just read it over. That would be awesome! Oh yeah, let me know of any changes you'd make too.

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Apartment A
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joshua@gmail.com



Carlyss, LA 70665


Dear Jerred Hebert,
Subject: Candidate for Diver / Tender Position

I am writing in regards to the Diver / Tender position that is listed on Global Industries web site. A few months ago there was a recruiter that came by the National Polytechnic College of Science campus. I really enjoyed what was presented to me in that meeting. Global Industries looks like a company that I could invest some time in and make a career out of.

I spent 4 years in the U.S. Air Force working under a Civil Engineering command. I have a strong understanding of how to get any task at hand done the right and safe way. I know how to work with and operate a wide range of machinery, everything from a 4,000 Lbs . forklift to a 12 inch diameter aluminum pipe mill.

I am currently still in school in Wilmington, CA. My graduation date is in May 2008. At that time I will be moving out to Louisiana.

As your employee, I will welcome hard work and be willing to learn new skills. I pride myself on my dependability and ability to work well in a fast paced team environment. I would appreciate an opportunity to work with Global Industries. Please call me at (559) 867-5309 if you have any questions or comments.


Sincerely,




Joshua B

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Thank you =)